Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree?

Most high-ranking

positions

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in

companies

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are being filled by men, despite that more than 50 per

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of the employees are

women

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in a lot of high-income countries.

Companies

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should be forced to dispense a certain proportion of these posts to

women

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.

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essay totally agrees with

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statement because, by doing

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, the relative

level

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of

competence

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in the company

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the ability to cooperate would increase. By allocating a certain per

cent

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of high-

level

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positions

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to

women

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,

companies

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would reach a higher

competence

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level

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.

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is because a lot of

women

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with the right

competence

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are overlooked

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since the tradition of male executives

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very strong. Allocated recruitment would result in

women

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with high

competence

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rather than mediocre men in those high-

level

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positions

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.

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, an audit of the relative

competence

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level

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in one of the biggest investment banks in Sweden showed a significant increase after they decided to allocate at least 40 per

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of their leading

positions

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to

women

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.

Companies

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with gender equality show better cooperation.

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, both male and female leaders are needed in a company because men and

women

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contribute with different aspects to the group dynamics.

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the crew is always formed with a certain per

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of both female and male crewmembers

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since cooperation is so vital. In conclusion,

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essay totally agrees with the statement that

companies

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should be obliged to recruit

women

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for a certain percentage of the leading

positions

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because

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is a way of increasing both the

level

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of

competence

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and

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cooperation in the company.