The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006

The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of men and women consuming more than five portions of fruits and
vegetables
Use synonyms
per day at different ages in the UK in 2006. At the onset, it is obvious that
fruit
Use synonyms
and
vegetables
Use synonyms
are mostly consumed by the age
group
Use synonyms
of 55-64 and less is eaten by the young generations of 19-24.
In addition
Linking Words
, almost in all
groups
Use synonyms
females use more portions of
fruit
Use synonyms
and vegetable than males per day. The highest demand for
fruit
Use synonyms
and
vegetables
Use synonyms
is by the old generation of 55-64,
while
Linking Words
teenagers of 19-24 use them quite seldom.
Fruit
Use synonyms
and
vegetables
Use synonyms
are
also
Linking Words
popular among their previous generations of 65-74 and 45-54. It is an interesting fact that the
group
Use synonyms
of age 35-44 uses live vitamins with the same proportion as 75 years old
group
Use synonyms
. Women are more addicted to
fruit
Use synonyms
and
vegetables
Use synonyms
in
groups
Use synonyms
of 45-54 consuming 5% more than men. In
groups
Use synonyms
of 65-74, 55-64, and 35-44 the difference in consumption is 4%.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, there is not so big a difference between both sexes in
groups
Use synonyms
of 25-34 with 2% and 19-24 with 1%.
On the other hand
Linking Words
, the
group
Use synonyms
of 75 uses cellulose with the same percentage by both gender
Submitted by s_syedy on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "on the other hand".
Vocabulary: Replace the words vegetables, fruit, group, groups with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: