Question: Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. Write a letter to the Customer Service department. In your letter: Describe the item you bought Outline what the problem is Explain why you want a refund Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter regarding the online bag I ordered

last

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month and received yesterday in order to show my concern and request a refund.

Firstly

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, I desired a black colour handbag which possessed a long strap making it convenient to carry

moreover

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, I firmly added instructions to deliver it in 7 days as per your policy. I am so disappointed in your customer service because they totally misinterpreted my order as they sent me a worn-out bag in the charcoal colour

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, they did not reply to my query.

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, they took a month to dispatch it.

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, I would request a refund as your team has been nothing but a source of complete nuisance to me

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to that, I can not tolerate

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a frivolous attitude which has sabotaged my mental health and money. I hope you'll ratify my request. Yours sincerely, Kaswa.

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

150 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

refund
defective
malfunction
compensation
disappointed
unsatisfactory
order number
purchase date
troubleshooting
receipt
customer service
promptly
resolution
process
policy
replacement
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