Question: Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. Write a letter to the Customer Service department. In your letter: Describe the item you bought Outline what the problem is Explain why you want a refund Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter regarding the online bag I ordered
last
month and received yesterday in order to show my concern and request a refund.
Firstly
, I desired a black colour handbag which possessed a long strap making it convenient to carry
moreover
, I firmly added instructions to deliver it in 7 days as per your policy. I am so disappointed in your customer service because they totally misinterpreted my order as they sent me a worn-out bag in the charcoal colour
furthermore
, they did not reply to my query.
Additionally
, they took a month to dispatch it.
Nevertheless
, I would request a refund as your team has been nothing but a source of complete nuisance to me
in addition
to that, I can not tolerate
such
a frivolous attitude which has sabotaged my mental health and money. I hope you'll ratify my request. Yours sincerely, Kaswa.
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