The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison
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The charts illustrate the
number
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of bilingual
students
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studying at a university in England in 2000 and 2010.
Overall
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, there were more
students
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speaking another tongue in 2010 and the
number
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of those who only speak English was likely to decline.
According to
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the charts, there was an equal amount of increase in the
number
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of bilingual
students
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who can speak either
Spanish
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or another
language
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in 2010
while
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Spanish
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continued to be the most common choice as a second
language
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.
For example
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, there was a slight rise of
Spanish
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speakers by 5% from 30% in 2000 to 35% in 2010.
In addition
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, 5% more
students
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acquired another tongue in 2010 as the population steadily grows from 15% to 20%.
This
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demonstrates a certain tendency of British learners to choose another tongue rather than French and German in 2010 and the total proportion of those who speak
Spanish
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and another
language
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accounted for more than half in 2010. In spite of the rising trends of
Spanish
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and other tongues, French became less popular for British pupils to take as an additional
language
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in 2010.
For instance
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, it dropped from 15% to 10%, which made it as common as German in 2010.
Moreover
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, far fewer
students
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solely speak English as the
number
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dramatically declined by half. German remained stable at 10% and no changes occurred in the
number
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of multilingual speakers.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, spanish, language with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • converse
  • additional languages
  • language proficiency
  • monolingual
  • multilingualism
  • proficient
  • trend
  • significant changes
  • decade
  • notable increase
  • commonly spoken
  • comparison
  • data reveal
  • observed
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