The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison
The charts illustrate the
number
of bilingual
students
studying at a university in England in 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, there were more
students
speaking another tongue in 2010 and the
number
of those who only speak English was likely to decline.
According to
the charts, there was an equal amount of increase in the
number
of bilingual
students
who can speak either
Spanish
or another
language
in 2010
while
Spanish
continued to be the most common choice as a second
language
.
For example
, there was a slight rise of
Spanish
speakers by 5% from 30% in 2000 to 35% in 2010.
In addition
, 5% more
students
acquired another tongue in 2010 as the population steadily grows from 15% to 20%.
This
demonstrates a certain tendency of British learners to choose another tongue rather than French and German in 2010 and the total proportion of those who speak
Spanish
and another
language
accounted for more than half in 2010. In spite of the rising trends of
Spanish
and other tongues, French became less popular for British pupils to take as an additional
language
in 2010.
For instance
, it dropped from 15% to 10%, which made it as common as German in 2010.
Moreover
, far fewer
students
solely speak English as the
number
dramatically declined by half. German remained stable at 10% and no changes occurred in the
number
of multilingual speakers.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, spanish, language with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • converse
  • additional languages
  • language proficiency
  • monolingual
  • multilingualism
  • proficient
  • trend
  • significant changes
  • decade
  • notable increase
  • commonly spoken
  • comparison
  • data reveal
  • observed
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