You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates the
percentage
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of fruit and vegetable consumption between
males
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and females, divided into 7 ranges of age which include 19 to 24, 25 to 34, 35 to 44, 45 to 54, 55 to 64, 65 to 74 and 75 years.
Overall
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, the
percentage
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of female consumption is all-time higher than
males
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, except 75-year-old group which is comparatively similar between men and women. Clearly, the ages between 55 to 64 consume the highest
percentage
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of eating fruit and vegetables. For more details, the age group between 19 to 24 are the lowest in both men and women, which is less than 15% in
males
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and slightly higher in the female group.
Moreover
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, the
percentage
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continuously increases until reaching the highest point in 55 to 64, up to almost 35 per cent in females and around 32 per cent in
males
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.
Then
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, the
percentage
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declined slowly until age 75, when the male and female percentages are equal, at 25 per cent.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, males with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • balanced diet
  • fruit and vegetable intake
  • recommendations
  • percentage
  • males
  • females
  • age group
  • consumption
  • comparison
  • analyze
  • increase
  • intake
  • statistics
  • data
  • trend
  • healthy lifestyle
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