Women and man are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Therefore, some people believe that it is right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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jobs Add a hyphen
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has
always been a debatable topic until today. Several people thought dividing some Change the verb form
have
profession
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professions
on
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apply
the
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apply
based
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base
of
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on
gender
can be a
right decision since both of them have totally different points of Correct article usage
the
strentghs
and Correct your spelling
strengths
strength
weeknesses
. I partially agree with the statement and will discuss Correct your spelling
weaknesses
further
in Correct pronoun usage
it further
this
essay.
Firstly
, it is certain that men holds
more Change the verb form
hold
phyisical
power than Correct your spelling
physical
women
. As there are plethora
of jobs which cannot be done without physical strength, Add an article
a plethora
that is
why the government should give preference to males or pay them high wages in comaprison
to females in those Correct your spelling
comparison
job
catergories
. Correct your spelling
categories
For example
, it is hard for a woman to perform the
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a
job
like mining, so that is
why the
most of the miners are boys.
Other than that, categorising Correct article usage
apply
job
on Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
gender
will not fair
to any sex. Add a missing verb
be fair
This
is simply because everyone has a dream to be something. When it comes to cerebral opportunities, then
everyone should have equal right
to work for it. To Fix the agreement mistake
rights
illusrtate
it, if Correct your spelling
illustrate
State
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the State
will limit
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limits
nail
artist profession only to Correct article usage
the nail
women
, then
it will be unfair to a man who always dreamed to be
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of being
the
one.
In conclusion, it is Correct article usage
apply
cyrstal
clear that Correct your spelling
crystal
women
are weaker when it come
to physicality Change the verb form
comes
comapring
to men. So it would be Correct your spelling
comparing
right
choice to only hire Add an article
the right
man
or to pay them high Fix the agreement mistake
men
wage
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wages
comparing
to Wrong verb form
compared
women
when it is realted
to Correct your spelling
related
extremely
hard physical Add an article
the extremely
an extremely
job
. However
, the
jobs that do not require any physical strength Correct article usage
apply
such
as teaching, engineering and others should not be for specific
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a specific
gender
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