You want to book a hotel that one of your friends recommended to you for a family holiday at the seaside. Write a letter to the hotel manager to make arrangements. In your letter, explain what accommodation you require and when you want to stay ask what will be included in the price enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel

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Dear Sir or Madam. Presently

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am writing a letter to you to get some details related to your hotel clearly, in spite of hearing crucial information from my friend.

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these, I have some questions for you. I want to stay in the most beautiful multi-storey hotel and there, it will be a better circumstance if have four rooms. Do you have as I wish attractions?

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, I plan to remain or stay from November 20 to November 25 in the 2024 year. So between the time, how much will it be paid there? Mostly, How many have attractions and a market or shop next to the building? Is it an affordable price? The important thing is that

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I wish, I had seen charming skyscrapers and got some relaxation by watching the waving of the sea. After that, I said , What a magnificent day! Dear, I am looking forward to expecting your response. Thank you for your answer in advance. Yours sincerely: Jumayeva Sarvinoz.

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