You recently purchased an item from a local store, but you are not satisfies with your purchase. Write a letter to the manager of the store. In your letter •Describe the item you bought and why you need it •explain why you are not happy with it • say what you would like the manager to do Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear sir, I am writing a letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding my order that I received yesterday night. It is a dining desk that
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ordered one week ahead. R23086T4R is its receipt number. I ordered dark brown
colour
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of chairs but it black in
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. I ordered
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because my dining area is light in
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. I was so excited because your company delivered one day before. I need
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dining
table
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urgently because next week is my sister's reception, my all guests are coming. Not only
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chairs'
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the chairs'
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colors different even one leg of the
table
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is broken and the glass of the
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is starched. I hope your company will take forward action regarding my dissatisfaction. I need the dark brown
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of chairs and a
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in good condition. Hoping for a prompt response from your side. Your faithful Raj
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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