The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two graphs illustrate
imports
from two countries (Australia, and Japan) over a 10-year
period
in New Zealand.
Overall
,
it is clear that
imports
changed a lot over the
period
.
In particular
, goods bought from Australia had increased by the end of a given
period
, doubled from the starting
point
, whilst
this
one from New Zealand had decreased by one-third by 2004. Regarding
imports
from Australia, the trend went upward until 1996 with an increase in the total amount by around 2500 million dollars. After that, the line showed a significant drop with the lowest
point
of 3000. Going upward and downward, the graph reached a peak in 2004, with twice more amount money as the initial
point
.
In contrast
,
imports
from Japan rose dramatically and reached a peak in 1997, with the total amount of money more than twice compared to 1994. After the
period
of fluctuation, the graph had undergone a sharp decline by 2001. Starting from that
point
,
imports
from Japan showed a slight decrease with the lowest
point
, accounting for 1000, which by one third less than the initial
point
.
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  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • significant changes
  • consistency
  • variations
  • overall growth
  • decline
  • diverge
  • converge
  • spiked
  • economic policies
  • trade agreements
  • global economic events
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