IELTS Writing Task Chart for the bar chart shows the percentage of males and females aged 18-20 in a city who participated in a various activities in ine month in 2015.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
I am writing this letter in reference to a request that is made in the National newspaper about contributions from its readers for an article, as I am interested in contributing about the facts in a book that had an influence on me.
In our contemporary era, it is witnessed that people’s tendency to go on holiday is increasing day by day. In this regard, some believe that individuals will go on holiday in their own home country instead of travelling abroad in the future. I disagree with this notion for two reasons, which are going to be discussed comprehensively in the following paragraphs.
Over the last few decades, there has been a dramatic increase in the number of people aged 15 and under. Although, currently, increasing the number of people on Earth has a positive impact on social stability, from my standpoint, in the future, this phenomenon could become a subject of concern, such as overpopulation and unemployment.
Organisations worldwide spend a huge sum of money on the promotion of their products to make customers buy them. Although ads inform about good-quality items, their frequent appearance can be distracting to purchasers.
I hope this message finds you well. I am writing to express my thoughts on the college cafeteria, which I frequent every lunchtime, and to propose some suggestions for enhancing the dining experience for everyone.
