You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurant describe the problems write about the action you want the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.
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resturant
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a loud
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restaurant
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task achievement
Ensure your letter follows a clear and logical structure. Begin with an introduction, provide details in the body paragraphs, and conclude with a closing paragraph.
coherence cohesion
Write a more formal greeting and closing in order to maintain a suitable writing tone.
coherence cohesion
Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single idea and develops it fully. Avoid mixing multiple ideas in a single paragraph.
lexical resource
Use more precise and accurate vocabulary. Be careful with spelling and word choice.
grammatical range and accuracy
Improve the range and variety of sentence structures. Add more complex sentences to demonstrate a higher level of grammar.
grammatical range and accuracy
Review the use of punctuation and grammar to improve clarity and create an academic writing style.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.