The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portions of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart above illustrates the proportion of males and females eating 5 or more portions of fruit and vegetables per day by
age
group
in the UK in 2006. Overall
, while
the percentage of people eating 5 or more portions a day in the 55-64 years old
Correct your spelling
64-year-old
group
was the highest, the opposite was seen in the 19-24 years old
Correct your spelling
24-year-old
age
group
.
Standing at 75%, the number
of people consuming enough fruit and vegetables in the 55-64 group
was the highest, followed by 65
-74 Correct article usage
the 65
group
and 75 group
with respectively 57% and 50%. The figure for the 75 Change to a plural noun
groups
age
group
equals three-forth the number
of 55-64 age
group
. Additionally
, the number
of males and females in the 75 age
group
equaled
each other.
Change the spelling
equalled
On the other hand
, standing at 50%, 45
-54 Correct article usage
the 45
age
group
was the highest, followed by 35-44, 25-34, and 19-24 with respectively 47%, 42% and 30%. 45
-54 Correct article usage
The 45
age
group
doubled 19
-24 and equaled Change preposition
from 19
four-fifth
Fix the agreement mistake
four-fifths
25
-34. Change preposition
of 25
Additionally
, in the 19-24 age
group
, the number
of men and women equal
to each other.Add a missing verb
is equal
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