The charts below show the proportions of British student at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the proportions of British student at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the proportions of British student at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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apply

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displays
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display

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the British
student's proportions
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students

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who had
responsibility
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a responsibility
the responsibility

The noun phrase responsibility seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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to speak foreign languages
in addition
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to English at one university in England, in 2000 and 2010. In ten years the
British
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number of British

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student's number has changed
for
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by

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50%. In 2010
people
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who speak
spanish
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Spanish

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has grown
for
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by

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5%. The amount of
people
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who
knows
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know

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another language has grown
for
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by

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5%, and
number
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a number
the number

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of
people
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who
knows
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know

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only English has dropped
for
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by

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10% which
is means
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means

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the
interesting
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interest

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of
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in

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learning
new
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a new

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language increased.
Overall
Linking Words

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,the
percent
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percentage

The word percent doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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of
people
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It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

who learned a new language or know went up which is good,
beacuse
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because

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportions" in your introduction.
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