The charts below show the proportions of British student at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts
down
Change preposition
apply
displays
the British Correct subject-verb agreement
display
student's proportions
who had Change noun form
students
responsibility
to speak foreign languages Add an article
a responsibility
the responsibility
in addition
to English at one university in England, in 2000 and 2010.
In ten years the Linking Words
British
student's number has changed Correct quantifier usage
number of British
for
50%. In 2010 Change preposition
by
people
who speak Use synonyms
spanish
has grown Change the capitalization
Spanish
for
5%. The amount of Change preposition
by
people
who Use synonyms
knows
another language has grown Correct subject-verb agreement
know
for
5%, and Change preposition
by
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
people
who Use synonyms
knows
only English has dropped Correct subject-verb agreement
know
for
10% which Change preposition
by
is means
the Change the verb form
means
interesting
Replace the word
interest
of
learning Change preposition
in
new
language increased.
Correct article usage
a new
Overall
,the Linking Words
percent
of Replace the word
percentage
people
who learned a new language or know went up which is good, Use synonyms
beacuse
every year we are developing.Correct your spelling
because
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