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The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.

The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of males and females
eat
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who eat
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 five or more
fruit
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fruits
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 and vegetables per day in the United Kingdom by
age
 group.
Overall
, it can be seen from the bar chart that
both
male
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males
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 and
female
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females
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 from 55 to 64
years
 old
is
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are
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 the highest.
While
the
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apply
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both
male
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males
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 and
female
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females
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 in 19-24
years
 old
is
Verb problem
have
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 the lowest
percentages
. It is apparent that the
percentages
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percentage
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 of
age
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the age
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 group in male
is
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are
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 lower than
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in female
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female
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females
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. The number of
female
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females
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 is higher than
male
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males
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 approximately 2, 3, 2, 5, 2 and 2
percentages
 in 19 to 24, 25 to 34, 35 to 44, 45 to 54, 55 to 64 and 65 to 74, respectively in
UK
Correct article usage
the UK
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 year 2006.
However
, the
percentages
 of
age
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the age
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 group
in
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apply
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75
years
 old
was still remained
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still remained
remained
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 at 25
percentages
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per cent
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 in
both
male
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males
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 and
female
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females
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 in 2006.
To conclude
, the
percentages
 of fruit and vegetables
were
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apply
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consumed five
of
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or
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 more
portion
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portions
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 in every
age
, the
percentages
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percentage
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 of
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the female
a female
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female
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females
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 is higher than
male
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males
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.
In contrast
, the only
one
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apply
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of
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apply
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different
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difference
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 from the other is
75
Correct word choice
that 75
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years
 old still
remain
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remains
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 25
percentages
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per cent
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 of
both
male
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males
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 and
female
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females
show examples
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, both, years, percentages with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 8 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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