The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of males and females

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five or more

fruit

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fruits

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and vegetables per day in the United Kingdom by

age

group.

Overall

, it can be seen from the bar chart that

both

male

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males

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and

female

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females

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from 55 to 64

years

old

is

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are

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the highest.

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the

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both

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and

female

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females

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in 19-24

years

old

is

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the lowest

percentages

. It is apparent that the

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of

age

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the age

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group in male

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lower than

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in female

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female

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females

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. The number of

female

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females

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is higher than

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males

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approximately 2, 3, 2, 5, 2 and 2

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in 19 to 24, 25 to 34, 35 to 44, 45 to 54, 55 to 64 and 65 to 74, respectively in

UK

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the UK

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year 2006.

However

, the

percentages

of

age

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the age

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group

in

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75

years

old

was still remained

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at 25

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in

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and

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in 2006.

To conclude

, the

percentages

of fruit and vegetables

were

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consumed five

of

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or

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more

portion

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portions

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in every

age

, the

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of

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the female

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female

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females

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is higher than

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males

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.

In contrast

, the only

one

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of

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different

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from the other is

75

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that 75

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years

old still

remain

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remains

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25

percentages

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of

both

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males

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and

female

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females

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.