The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The 2 given line graphs depict the income of import data from 2 countries Australia and Japan between 1994 and 2004.
Overall
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, the number of imports from Australia increased
at the end
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of the timeframe
while
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the other decreased.
According to
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the figure Australia, in the first 4 years, the data fluctuated moderately around 4000 lot until reached the lowest mark at 3000.
Then
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it has an increase and reaches a peak of 8000 banks
at the end
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of the period.
Moreover
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, the figure starts at 4000 tons
then
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the highest mark on the line graph was 8000. Moving onto the data of New Zealand, it begins with 3000
then
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reaches its highest stop after 3 years of approximately 6000 total,
then
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fluctuated around 6000
then
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hit its lowest mark at 2000
at the end
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of the period
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • significant changes
  • consistency
  • variations
  • overall growth
  • decline
  • diverge
  • converge
  • spiked
  • economic policies
  • trade agreements
  • global economic events
  • predictive insights
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