The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two line graphs depict, the
imports
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for New Zealand from two different countries namely
Australia
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and Japan for 10
years
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. The units were measured in millions.
Overall
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, both graphs showed fluctuations.
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,
Australia
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, showed an increase in
imports
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in contrast
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to Japan showed a downward
trend
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. I will
further
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explain both the graphs below. In the case of
Australia
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, the products that came to New Zealand from
Australia
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showed a steady escalation from
year
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1994 to 1996.
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, onwards 1996 it falls slowly upto the
year
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1998 and dropped suddenly to 3000
million
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in the
year
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1999. From
this
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trend
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followed an upward
trend
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and the
imports
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rose and reached 7000
million
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in the
year
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2001 and
then
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after
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this
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in the
year
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2002 again fell and came up to 5000, between the
years
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2002- 2003 and
finally
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in the
year
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2004 showed an increase of about 8000
million
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.
On the other hand
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,
imports
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from Japan showed little variation throughout 10
years
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. The
imports
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started from 3000
million
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in the
year
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1994 and gradually grew and between the
years
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1996 to 1997 it reached the level of 6000
million
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.
While
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in 1997
this
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trend
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steadily started decreasing and between the
year
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1998 to the
year
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1999 it remained steady at around
about
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4000
million
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and in the
year
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2000 showed a steep increase and onwards to the
year
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2004 it plummeted and reached about 2000
million
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words imports, australia, years, trend, year, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "falls" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • significant changes
  • consistency
  • variations
  • overall growth
  • decline
  • diverge
  • converge
  • spiked
  • economic policies
  • trade agreements
  • global economic events
  • predictive insights
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