You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In the letter: • explain why you were at the restaurant • describe the problems • write about the action you want the manager to take You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Manager, I feel the need to bring to your attention an issue I have with the manner in which you bring food to
customer's
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table. Allow me to elaborate.
Last
month, I went
your
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restaurant for a family dinner, I noticed that when your waiters bring food to the
tabe
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table
, it is very unhygienic.
Waiter
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was holding the dish
while
his fingers were inside the dish, and he was not wearing the
golves
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gloves
. it was
litteraly
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literally
very
upsating
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upsetting
updating
to see
while
you expect to have a good dinner with your family. You have to acknowledge that
customer
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will not return after watching
this
stuff. I trust you can empathize with my situation.
Thus
, I am expecting you to take
immidiate
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immediate
action by educating
you
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staff
how
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on how
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they should serve. I am
also
expecting you to take action against staff who are responsible for allowing
to
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us to
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give service like
this
. Your timely attention to
this
matter is needed, Shivam.
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coherence cohesion
Use paragraphs to organize your ideas more clearly. For instance, one paragraph for the problem, one for the impact, and one for the action you want taken.
task achievement
Increase the level of formality in your language. Words like 'unhygienic' and 'upsetting' are appropriate, but phrases like 'literally very upsetting' should be revised for a more formal tone.
task achievement
Make sure to proofread your letter for spelling and grammatical errors. For instance, 'golves' should be 'gloves', and 'immidiate' should be 'immediate'.
coherence cohesion
Your letter begins and ends with appropriate greetings and closings, contributing to a respectful tone.
task achievement
You clearly stated the purpose of your letter and described the problem you encountered.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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