You recently purchased an item from a local store, but you are not satisfies with your purchase. Write a letter to the manager of the store. In your letter •Describe the item you bought and why you need it •explain why you are not happy with it •say what you would like the manager to do Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to bring to your notice about defective piece, which was deliver
to me Change the verb form
was delivered
on
Change preposition
apply
last
Thursday 26th May 2023. I had
purchased Unnecessary verb
apply
Correct article usage
an amazon
amazon kindle
on Thursday from your departmental store, but it was not working as per expectation. The gadget is used for teaching my children online.
Correct your spelling
Amazon Kindle
On
opening the package, I was Change preposition
Upon
in shock
that it Change preposition
shocked
is
not working as per Wrong verb form
was
product
booklet. It was Correct article usage
the product
disappointment
to work on Add an article
a disappointment
defective
piece. After trying 10 times somehow it starts working but performance is below expectation.
Add an article
the defective
a defective
Therefore
, I would like to exchange the product as it is mentioned in warranty
period. The product has Correct article usage
the warranty
12-month
warranty and exchange clause from the date of purchase. For your reference receipt and warranty card Correct article usage
a 12-month
is
enclosed with Correct subject-verb agreement
are
this
letter.
I look forward to your early response and waiting for resolution
of the matter.
Yours faithfully,
Jay MichaelCorrect article usage
the resolution
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task achievement
Clarify the specific issues with the Kindle in more detail to strengthen your case.
coherence cohesion
Smooth out sentence structure for better flow; consider varying sentence lengths.
task achievement
Provide a specific call to action or a timeline for the desired resolution.
task achievement
You clearly identified the problem and the action you want taken, which fulfils the task requirements.
greeting and closing
The introduction and closing are well-structured and polite.
logical structure
Logical structure with clear paragraphs covering different points.