The graphs below show the trends in three boys and girls names which are currently in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
In the chart above, three
names
of grils
and boys were provided. The chart Correct your spelling
girls
represent
the duration between 1925 and 2000. Some Change the verb form
represents
names
become more popular and some are not famous.
In the frist
Correct your spelling
first
gragh
, there are boys Correct your spelling
graph
names
, which are Daniel, Oliver, and Alexander. In the year Change preposition
apply
of
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apply
1925
the Add a comma
1925,
names
of Daniel and Alexander were close to each other.But, then
oilver
became more used the Alexander. Correct your spelling
silver
Finaly
, in the year of 1975, the Correct your spelling
Finally
names
Fix the agreement mistake
name
of
Oliver was not used at all, and the Change preposition
apply
name
of
Danial Change preposition
apply
become
more popular.
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became
However
, the second chart contains the trends of girls
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girls'
girl's
names
. In the year of 1925, Emily
Change noun form
Emily's
name
was the only used
in the UK, and Correct pronoun usage
one used
then
after 50 years it began to compet
the the Correct your spelling
compete
complete
names
of Isabell and Sophia. Anyway, after 50 years, the name
of Emily still
the most used Add a missing verb
is still
the
UK in the Change preposition
in the
last
century.
In conclusion, there are many trand
Correct your spelling
brand
name
of Change to a plural noun
names
grils
and boys in Correct your spelling
girls
UK
, but Daniel and Emily are the most famous Correct article usage
the UK
name
during the last
century. In my opinion, these two name
are pretty and nice Change to a plural noun
names
names
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