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The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.

The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
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world
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the world
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 health institution said that
people
 should eat minimum
five
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of five
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 fruits per day, diagram illustrates the number of two
gender
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genders
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 in
United
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the United
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 Kingdom with given
ages
 in 2006. We can see from the table that the in given seven different
ages
female
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females
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ates
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eat
 more fruits and vegetables than males, it is noticed that the lowest indicator
ages
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is ages
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 19-24 with 16% and the highest is from 55 to 64 with 34%. As can be seen from the table
from
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, with each increase in age, the percentage of
people
 who eat fruits and vegetables becomes larger,
however
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 after 64 aged
people
 who
eats
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eat
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 the indicator
deacrease
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decrease
decreased
 from 34% to 25%.
Whose
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Those
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 55-64
year
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years
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 remained the biggest spenders on fruit and vegetables, with all other
ages
 spending much more on them.
According to
 the
people
whose
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who are
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 75 years or more only their index by fruit consumption is the same. In the period 2006 saw
a
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 highest growth 35%.
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