You want to book a hotel that one of your friends recommended to you for a family holiday at the seaside. Write a letter to the hotel manager to make arrangements. In your letter, explain what accommodation you require and when you want to stay ask what will be included in the price enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter regarding booking a

room

at your hotel which is recommended by my friend. I am looking for

Correct article usage

an aluxrious

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aluxrious

Correct your spelling

a luxurious

luxurious

room

next week with a balcony where I can enjoy the sea and it should be convenient for four people, so we can feel comfortable during the stay. Please share with me the details of a different

room

including rate,

room

size, facilities, breakfast or dinner menu and other information. Because I am coming there for the first time, I do not know much about that area, so please suggest to me some kind of activities and places where we can chill and relax during our journey. Looking forward to hearing from your side. Your Faithfully, Ankit

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single idea per paragraph

Ensure each paragraph addresses a single idea for better clarity. For example, separate the accommodation details from the query about included amenities.

complete response

Provide a more detailed explanation of your accommodation requirements, including dates of stay, to ensure clarity.

suitable writing tone

You used a polite and formal tone suitable for a letter to a hotel manager.

greeting and closing

The closing of your letter is polite and appropriate, which creates a good impression.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

124 words

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