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The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.

The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
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The provided bar chart depicts the rates of
men
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 and
women
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 who eat
five
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 or more
portions
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 of fruits and vegetables per day in the United Kingdom in 7 different age sections.
Overall
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,
women
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 and
men
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 who are in their 55-64 make up the vast majority of eating
five
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 or more
portions
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 a day.
Women
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's percentages in the chart are generally higher than
men
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's. For
men
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 and
women
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 who are in their 19-24 15% of males eat
five
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 or more
portions
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while
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women
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's
rate
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 is more than 15%. 20 percent of
Men
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 who are in their 25-34 eat
five
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 or more before approximately 22% with
women
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 which is as same as
men
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 who are in their 35 to 44.
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, 25% of
women
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 who are in their 35-44 eat fruit and vegetables in
five
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 or more
portions
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. The highest proportion of the whole chart is
women
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 who are in their 55-64, their
rate
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 is around 34%
while
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 in that age
men
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's
rate
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 is just around 32%.
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,
men
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 and
women
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 who are 75 eat at the same
rate
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 which is 25%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, five, portions, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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