The line chart illustrates the labour force employment in five economic sectors during the period from 1930 to 2010 in USA. These five economic sectors include industrial sector, sales and office, farming and fishing and foresting, technical sector, and other services.
The line chart given provides information about the
number of
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workforce
in 5 different sectors from 1930 to 2010 in Change to a plural noun
workforces
United
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the United
states
of America , which contain Capitalize word
States
industrial
sector, Correct article usage
the industrial
sales
and office
, farming fishing and foresting, technical sector, and other types of services.
Overall
,The percentage of workers in farming ,fishing and foresting dramatically fall
over the period of time, Wrong verb form
fell
while
popularity
of employed in industrial , Add an article
the popularity
sales
and
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office
and technical rise
.
Taking a closer look at the line graphs, we can see that in 1930, the rate of Replace the word
rose
worklaborers
in technical and Correct your spelling
work laborers
sales
and office
begen by neraly
15 %.Correct your spelling
nearly
Moreover
, the amount of employees in farming and
fishing and foresting was almost 80%. Between 1930 and 1990, Correct word choice
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workforce
in industrial , Add an article
the workforce
a workforce
sales
and office
and technical increased just between 10 Correct your spelling
per cent
perecent
to around 25 %, Correct your spelling
per cent
whereas
the number of farming ,fishing and foresting decline
below 40%
In 1990 , industrial and farming ,fishing and foresting became equal in Wrong verb form
declined
ratio
of around 40%.Add an article
the ratio
a ratio
Than
, the 3 different fields which are ( industrial,technical, and Replace the word
Then
sales
and office
) rose approximately 30% to 38% in 2010.On other
hand, farming ,fishing and foresting showed a Correct article usage
the other
decreased
from 78%to 3%at the Replace the word
decrease
last
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