The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The diagrams provide information about
the
New Zealand's importation of goods from Correct article usage
apply
Australia
and Use synonyms
Japan
between 1994 and 2004.
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Overall
, there was a significant growth of products being imported from Linking Words
Australia
, from nearly 4000 to 8000 over the period as compared to Use synonyms
Imports
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rom
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from
Japan
which dropped from 2000 Use synonyms
t0
3000 in the same period.
New Zealand experienced an import increase from both countries in the first few years, Correct your spelling
to
imports
from Use synonyms
Australia
rose from nearly 4000 to almost 6500 between 1994 and the beginning of 1996 yet Use synonyms
imports
from Use synonyms
Japan
rose from 3000 to slightly above 6000 between the years 1994 and the Use synonyms
end
of 1996.
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After
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this
upward Linking Words
trend
the country experienced a sudden downward trend which left Add a comma
trend,
imports
from Use synonyms
Australia
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to
as low as 3000 by the Change preposition
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end
of 1998 and that of Use synonyms
Japan
dropped to nearly 4000 by the Use synonyms
end
of 1998.
By the beginning of Use synonyms
1999
the Add a comma
1999,
imports
from Use synonyms
Australia
started to rise again until they reached close to 7500 Use synonyms
then
fell off again before they started rising back up to the Linking Words
pick
of 8000 by the Correct your spelling
peak
end
of 2004.
Contrary to Use synonyms
imports
from Use synonyms
Australia
, those from Use synonyms
Japan
tried to rise in 1999 but when they reached 6000 they dropped significantly to 2000 by the Use synonyms
end
of 2004.Use synonyms
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, japan, imports, end with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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