The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The diagrams provide information about
the
New Zealand's importation of goods from Correct article usage
apply
Australia
and Japan
between 1994 and 2004.
Overall
, there was a significant growth of products being imported from Australia
, from nearly 4000 to 8000 over the period as compared to Imports
rom
Correct your spelling
from
Japan
which dropped from 2000 t0
3000 in the same period.
New Zealand experienced an import increase from both countries in the first few years, Correct your spelling
to
imports
from Australia
rose from nearly 4000 to almost 6500 between 1994 and the beginning of 1996 yet imports
from Japan
rose from 3000 to slightly above 6000 between the years 1994 and the end
of 1996.
After
this
upward trend
the country experienced a sudden downward trend which left Add a comma
trend,
imports
from Australia
to
as low as 3000 by the Change preposition
apply
end
of 1998 and that of Japan
dropped to nearly 4000 by the end
of 1998.
By the beginning of 1999
the Add a comma
1999,
imports
from Australia
started to rise again until they reached close to 7500 then
fell off again before they started rising back up to the pick
of 8000 by the Correct your spelling
peak
end
of 2004.
Contrary to imports
from Australia
, those from Japan
tried to rise in 1999 but when they reached 6000 they dropped significantly to 2000 by the end
of 2004.Submitted by sisalt100 on
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, japan, imports, end with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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