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The table below shows the production of cacao beans in six regions between 1992 and 1998. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of cacao beans in six regions between 1992 and 1998. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table shows the figures of produced cacao
beans
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 from 1992 to 1998.
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, a considerable amount of cacao
beans
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 was from Asia and South America. Especially in 1992, the amount of
caco
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cacao
beans
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 from Asia was about 119,000 in 1992, lower than South America.
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, it jumped to 436,000 in 1998, which was the highest figure and change among the regions.
On the other hand
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, Africa cultivated the lowest amount of
caco
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cacao
beans
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 in 1992, though it showed a significant rise, it dropped to 25,000 in 1998 which was the lowest figure in the table.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words beans with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • significant increase
  • significant decrease
  • stable production
  • fluctuating
  • highest producer
  • lowest producer
  • annual production
  • metric tons
  • period of study
  • regional comparison
  • agricultural output
  • economic impact
  • climate conditions
  • agrarian practices
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