You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope
this
email finds you well, I am writing Linking Words
this
email in order to solve the purchase issue that I had yesterday. My name is Nouf and I have been a customer Linking Words
for
your bank Change preposition
of
since
10 years. My ID number is 0272049901
Yesterday I was shocked by a credit transaction that I am sure I did not buy, and I believe that it Change preposition
for
happed
by mistake from your side. It comes from a global and unknown website.
The number of the purchase order is 37399272, and the cost is 392$.
Please investigate and make sure that it's not a scam attempt ,and I really hope that you find a Verb problem
happened
sloution
. I would suggest a refund for the total amount to my account as soon as possibleCorrect your spelling
solution
,
because I really need it by Remove the comma
apply
Sunday's
morning.
Thank you for understanding, looking forward to hearing from you.
Nouf,
Best regards,Change noun form
Sunday
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task achievement
The response could be improved by providing a more detailed explanation of how you discovered the issue with the credit card statement, such as reviewing monthly expenses or receiving a notification.
task achievement
Ensure that all parts of the task are covered comprehensively to further improve task achievement.
coherence cohesion
Consider using transition words to enhance the flow between sentences and paragraphs, making the text easier to follow.
task achievement
The letter maintains a polite and formal tone throughout, which is suitable for communication with a bank manager.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph focuses on a distinct aspect of the issue, such as identification, explanation, and resolution.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite