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The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.

The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
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This
 bar chart depicts a comparison between
two
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the two
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gender
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genders
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 in types of consumption
five
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of five
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 or more portions of fruit and vegetables. It is measured by numbers in percentages in 2006.
Overall
,
as
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apply
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it can be clearly seen that females
at
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aged
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age
 55 to 64
yeasr
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years
year
 were the greatest
in
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at
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 using fruit and vegetables.
By contrast
, males
at
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aged
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age
 19 to 24 years were the lowest over
this
 year.
According to
 the given data in the following graph,
women
 used 35% of food at
age
 55-64. they were higher than
men
 by 5%.
Whereas
,
men
 only consumed 15% of meals
at
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in
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 the younger generation. They were lesser than
women
 by only 1% at
age
 19- 24.
However
, both genders over 70 shared
a
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 same percentage which was 25%.
On the other hand
, both
men
 and
women
 had nearly a similar percentage in the number of food at
age
 25 to 44.
Moreover
,
women
 were higher than
men
 by 3% approximately in
this
 period of
age
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, women, men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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