The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
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This
bar chart depicts a comparison between two
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the two
gender
in types of consumption Change to a plural noun
genders
five
or more portions of fruit and vegetables. It is measured by numbers in percentages in 2006.
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of five
Overall
, as
it can be clearly seen that females Correct word choice
apply
at
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aged
age
55 to 64 yeasr
were the greatest Correct your spelling
years
year
in
using fruit and vegetables. Change preposition
at
By contrast
, males at
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aged
age
19 to 24 years were the lowest over this
year.
According to
the given data in the following graph, women
used 35% of food at age
55-64. they were higher than men
by 5%. Whereas
, men
only consumed 15% of meals at
the younger generation. They were lesser than Change preposition
in
women
by only 1% at age
19- 24. However
, both genders over 70 shared a
same percentage which was 25%.
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the
On the other hand
, both men
and women
had nearly a similar percentage in the number of food at age
25 to 44. Moreover
, women
were higher than men
by 3% approximately in this
period of age
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