The pie charts give information about the proportion males and females in employment in six categories divided into manual and non-manual occupations
This
chart reveals information about the employment percentage of both genders in six occupations which are categorised into manual and non-manual professions.
Overall
, it can be observed that the majority of females choose corporate jobs over manual, while
over half, of men prefer to earn money through crafts and performing labour duties.
For females, 31% pursued their career as a clerk or in related fields. However
the job rate in the managerial roles was 2% less at 29% compared to the clerical positions. Around 27% show interest in other manual categories. Add a comma
However,
whereas
, the least desired by women were jobs in other non-manual positions at 9 %. Only 4% of them worked as craftsmen and general labourers.
Of men, more than 50% got employed doing manual work with craft at 24%, general workers at 2% and other manual tasks at 26%. However
, in the non-manual category maximum of males(36%) preferred to work as professionals, and only about one-third of this
figure worked on clerical and other tasks.Submitted by plkkhati on
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