The charts below show the comparison of time spent, in minutes per day, by UK males and females on household and leisure activities in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the comparison of time spent, in minutes per day, by UK males and females on household and leisure activities in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table and bar chart, represent the average
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per
day
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people in the UK spend on
leisure
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activities
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and household chores, divided by gender, back in 2008.
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, as shown in
both
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datasets,
both
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genders spend the most
time
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on TV, radio and video as part of their everyday hobby, and, compared to male individuals,
women
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spend more
hours
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on household
activities
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. To start with, let's first discuss the
leisure
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activities
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table. It is stated that
men
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spent more
time
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on
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watching TV and
video
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videos
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and listening to
radio
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the radio
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, with just above 2 and a quarter
hours
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a
day
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, than
women
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with almost 2
hours
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per
day
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. When reading books,
both
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parties spend almost 20
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per
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, with only
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diffrence
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difference
. Doing sports takes the least
time
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of the
day
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,
placing
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between 11 to 15
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. In total,
men
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spent 170 and
women
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spent 148
minutes
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a
day
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on
leisure
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. Moving on to the bar chart, we can see
time
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spent on housework.
Women
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spent an average of 2 and a half
hours
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a
day
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doing chores, with cooking and washing taking up most of the
time
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, at 1 hour 15
minutes
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. The rest of the
time
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from most to least was spent on shopping, washing and ironing
cloths
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clothes
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and repairing stuff, respectively. For
men
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, the average
time
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spent in a
day
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doing household
labor
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was just above an hour.
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time
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was mostly spent on cooking and washing, taking up 30
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of the
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, and was followed by shopping, repairing and
cloth
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clothes
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washing. In conclusion,
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while
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men
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spent more
time
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in a
day
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on
leisure
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rather than chores,
women
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spent almost the same amount of
time
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on
both
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activities
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, with exactly 2
minutes
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more on housework.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words minutes, day, leisure, activities, both, time, women, hours, men with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comparison
  • Household activities
  • Leisure activities
  • Average
  • Significantly more/less
  • Markedly more/less
  • Striking difference
  • Counterparts
  • Societal norms
  • Differing interests
  • Dedicated time
  • Household tasks
  • Maintenance
  • Repairs
  • Pursuits
  • Socializing
  • Gender divide
  • Traditional roles
  • Allocation of time
  • Reflects
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