The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting
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The pie charts illustrate the proportions of British
students
at a university in England who could speak languages other than English in 2000 and 2010.
In 2000, 20% of students
were monolingual, while
the remaining 80% spoke at least one additional language
. Among these, 30% could speak Spanish, making it the most common second language
. French was spoken by 15% of students
, followed by German, also
at 15%. Additionally
, 10% of students
spoke two other languages, while
10% spoke another unspecified language
.
By 2010, the percentage of monolingual students
decreased to 10%. Spanish remained the most popular language
, with its share increasing to 35%. The proportion of students
speaking French declined to 10%, while
the percentage of German speakers stayed constant at 10%. The figures for students
speaking two other languages and another unspecified language
remained stable at 15% and 10%, respectively.
Overall
, the data indicates a growth in multilingualism among students
, with Spanish gaining more popularity, while
fewer students
chose French as their additional language
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