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The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.

The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.
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The bar chart presents the
proportion
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 of
males
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 and females consuming five or greater portions of healthy foods per day as advised by the World Health Organization.
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 includes data from 2006 in the UK.
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, females follow the recommendations by gaining the highest percentage in all
age
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 groups except for 75
years
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 old which has an equal
proportion
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 to
males
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.
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, the lowest ratio is those people aged 19-24
years
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 old in both sexes. In detail, the percentage of 19-24-year-old men who consume five or more portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK was 15%,
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 was considered the lowest
proportion
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 in the study.
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,
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 increased by 5% with 25-34
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 old. Equally, 22.5% of men in 35-44 and 45-54
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 old included fruits and vegetables daily. The
age
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 group with the greatest fraction were men aged 55- 64
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 old with more than 30%.
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, as
age
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 declined, the rate of 65-74-year-old
males
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 went down as well by 5% and
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, a quarter of 75-year-old
males
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 included fruits and vegetables daily. In comparison, the
proportion
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 of females
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 increased as
age
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 went up. From more than 15% in the 19-24
age
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 group to just above 20% in women aged 25-34
years
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 old. There was a small rise in the fraction of women aged 35-44
years
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 old with 25% and
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 continuously grew in the next
age
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 group and peaked at 35% in women at 55-64
years
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 old. Similar to
males
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,
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proportion
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 slowly dropped to a quarter at the
age
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 of 75.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, males, age, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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