The charts below show the comparison of time spent, in minutes per day, by UK males and females on household and leisure activities in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

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The table depicts how many

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males and females spent on leisure activities, and the bar illustrates the differences in household activities between them.

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survey was conducted in the UK in 2008,

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and presents

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data in average

minute

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minutes

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per day.

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, watching TV or videos and listening to the radio were the most popular leisure activities for both genders. For housework,

women

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spent more time

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apply

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cooking and washing

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men

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on repairs. In the UK, regardless of gender, listening radio and watching videos or TV took the largest average minute per day,with

men

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spending longer than

women

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- 137

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for he and 118 for she. Followed by reading books

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for

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minutes

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for

men

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and one minute longer for

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Sport

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Sports

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excersises

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exercises

reached the smallest time, ranging between 11 and 15

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with males

had

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a higher amount. In terms of household chores, for "cooking and washing",

women

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averaged about 75

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daily compared to around 30

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daily for

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trend

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occurred in "clothing washing and ironing"

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"shopping", showing 30

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and 25

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that

women

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needed

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men

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made up 15

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and 20

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, respectively.

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men

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in repairing accounted

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for 10

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minutes

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longer than

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, which reached 19

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words minutes, women, men with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

208 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Comparison
Household activities
Leisure activities
Average
Significantly more/less
Markedly more/less
Striking difference
Counterparts
Societal norms
Differing interests
Dedicated time
Household tasks
Maintenance
Repairs
Pursuits
Socializing
Gender divide
Traditional roles
Allocation of time
Reflects

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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers , are leaving their own poor countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child's development as other subjects, so it should be compulsory in high schools. to what extent do you agree or disagree ?