Task 1 Question You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day. The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of both genders who are using five or more portions of fruit and vegetables each day divided into different groups depending on their ages (based in
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the Uk
Uk
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UK
Overall
, females' expenditure was more than the males, but boys And girls who are 75 years old have the same percentage.
In the group from 19-24 , boys and girls have a slight difference , where gentlemen were 15% and females were just over 15% , the proportion of people started growing up in a
steadily way from 25 to 54.
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On the other hand
, by the age of 55-64, both genders were reaching the highest amount of consuming portion of fruit and vegetables , then
it starts to decrease significantly until 25% each of them.Submitted by fatmalfarsi09 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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