The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006. The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day.

The bar chart shows the percentage of males and females in the UK by age group in 2006.

The world health organization recommends that people should eat five or more portion of fruit and vegetables per day.
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The table depicts the proportion of people in the UK in 2006 who consumed fruit and vegetables equal to or more than five portions across genders
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, the percentage of fruit and vegetable consumption in ages 55-64 was dominant in both sexes. Meanwhile, people aged 19-24 showed the smallest consumption. Looking in more detail, the total number of men aged 55-64 consuming five or more portions was approximately 35%, which was slightly higher than women in the same
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. Interestingly, almost all
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categories recorded that the male percentage was higher than that of females, except the 75+
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both genders accounted for the same rate. During the same year, the percentage of those aged 65-74 consuming plant-based food reached more than 25%, with males leading by around 2% compared to the opposite.
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, the youngest
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comprised the lowest portion of the plant-based consumption, making up around 15%,
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category was over 5% higher and
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, the remaining category,
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recorded substantial differences between males and females, with 27% and 22% respectively.
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