The bar chart below shows the percentages of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activities in 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and comparison.

The bar chart below shows the percentages of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activities in 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and comparison.
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The column chart illustrates the physical
activity
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which was done regularly between different age groups of Australian
men
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and
women
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in 2010. It is measured by percentage.
It is clear that
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the female
activity
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was more than the male
activity
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, except for 15 to 24, the
men
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and the
women
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had the most exercise from 15 to 24 and 45 to 54 respectively.
First,
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it can be seen that body
activity
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among the
women
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with age, increased until 55 to 65. It had mildly climbed from 47.7 per
cent
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in 15 to 24 and reached 53.3 per
cent
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in 45 to 54.
However
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, after 55 years old the
women
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's practice decreased by 53 per
cent
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and the female who were 65 and over had the lowest percentage compared to other
ages
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.
In contrast
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, the
men
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had more physical
activity
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in the lower
ages
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( 15 to 25) in 2010. They were the only groups that had percentages more than 50 per
cent
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. in 25 to 34, it is obvious that regular physical
activity
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decreased sharply to 42.2 per
cent
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among the
men
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,
Although
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35 to 44
ages
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were one of the
ages
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that the
women
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did a lot of regular body practices, the
men
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at
this
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level had a lower percentage than 40 per
cent
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. After 45 years old the rate of exercising had a mild increase figure.
As a result
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,
this
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trend was unlike the
women
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did.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words activity, men, women, cent, ages with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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