The two figures below show the rate of criminal convictions among men and women of different ages in the UK and the proportion of male and female prison inmates in the British prison system. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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Given are two figures concerning criminality in Britain. The first provides data on the rates of conviction among
men
and Use synonyms
women
of various ages, Use synonyms
while
the second indicates the gender balance of the UK prison population
It is apparent from the information supplied that the rate of conviction among Brits of both sexes increases exponentially during adolescence and peaks at the age of about 20. Linking Words
Also
evident is the fact that Linking Words
men
are far more likely to offend than Use synonyms
women
. From a negligible 2% among 10-year-old boys, the male conviction rate soars to approximately 16% among 20-year-olds. The percentage of female offenders, meanwhile, climbs from 0% among girls of 10 to some 5% for 20-year-olds. The subsequent decades, Use synonyms
however
, see dramatic decreases in criminality among both sexes. A mere 2% of crimes are committed by 60-year-old Linking Words
men
and 0% by Use synonyms
women
of the same age.
As for the proportion of male and female prison inmates, Use synonyms
men
outnumber Use synonyms
women
24 to 1. Some 96% of all prisoners are Use synonyms
men
, Use synonyms
while
the remainder Linking Words
is
female.Correct subject-verb agreement
are
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