The charts below show the comparison of time spent, in minutes per day, by UK males and females on household and leisure activities in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Answer
The graphs illustrate the comparison
time
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was spending
, in in minutes per Wrong verb form
spent
day
, by United Kingdom men and women on household and leisure Use synonyms
activities
in 2008.
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Overall
, the highest leisure Linking Words
activities
among males and females showed in 2008, by Use synonyms
used
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using
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contrast
the Add a comma
contrast,
least
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last
time
was Use synonyms
spending
on Wrong verb form
spent
sport
exercises. Change the noun form
sports
Moreover
, the the most housework Linking Words
activities
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doing
by men and women in Wrong verb form
done
UK
were cooking and washing.
The average Correct article usage
the UK
minute
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spending
by males Replace the word
spent
in
devices was 137 Change preposition
on
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minute
per Fix the agreement mistake
minutes
day
which is slightly higher than females with only 118 Use synonyms
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minute
per Change to a plural noun
minutes
day
. Use synonyms
While
the Linking Words
time
spent in reading books Use synonyms
approximately
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is approximately
similer
in two groups.
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similar
On the other hand
, in homework Linking Words
activites
the highest Correct your spelling
activities
time
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was spending
by female Wrong verb form
spent
was
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spent
in
cooking and washing Change preposition
on
activities
by just over 70 Use synonyms
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minute
per Change to a plural noun
minutes
day
in comparison to the males only 30 Use synonyms
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minute
per Fix the agreement mistake
minutes
day
which is Use synonyms
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a conciderablly
conciderablly
significant Correct your spelling
considerable
differance
.Correct your spelling
difference
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