The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 25 20 15 10 5 0 Food and drink Restaurant and Hotel Entertainment Under 30 31-45 46-60 61-75 76+ Citizens' expenditure in the UK
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The bar chart gives information about spending money on three different categories which are food and drinks ,
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and entertainment sections in various age groups of residents in the United Kingdom in the year 2004 .
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Overall
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