The charts below show the comparison of time spent, in minutes per day, by UK males and females on household and leisure activities in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the comparison of time spent, in minutes per day, by UK males and females on household and leisure activities in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the comparison of time spent, in minutes per day, by UK males and females on household and leisure activities in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs demonstrate how many
minutes
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men and women in the UK spent on household and pastime activities in 2008.
Overall
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, the most favoured leisure activity was entertaining themselves by TV, video and radio.
According to
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the second chart, females did the vast majority of chores,
while
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only repairing devices was accomplished mainly by males. Television, video and radio content was watched to unwind British people, showing the highest levels for both genders at 137 and 118
minutes
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.
However
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, reading and doing sports were fulfilled by a minority of citizens, with books illustrating above 18 and sports for more than 11
minutes
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. Cooking and washing consumed the most time of humans, more than an hour for females and half an hour for males. Approximately half an hour of the day was necessary to purchase products and other stuff. Ladies dedicated 0.5 hours to doing laundry and ironing,
as well as
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men spent 10
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. Fixing broken items,
on the other hand
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, was the task of males, consuming twice more of their time as ladies.

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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words minutes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Comparison
  • Household activities
  • Leisure activities
  • Average
  • Significantly more/less
  • Markedly more/less
  • Striking difference
  • Counterparts
  • Societal norms
  • Differing interests
  • Dedicated time
  • Household tasks
  • Maintenance
  • Repairs
  • Pursuits
  • Socializing
  • Gender divide
  • Traditional roles
  • Allocation of time
  • Reflects
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