The pie charts illustrate the percentage of British students at a particular university in England who were bilingual or multilingual
in addition
to English, in 2000 and 2010. Linking Words
Overall
, Linking Words
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Correct article usage
the Spanish
Spanish only
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Spanish-only
group
was the most common pupils, Use synonyms
while
the remaining Linking Words
groups
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share
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shared
the
similar proportion.
In 2000, Correct article usage
a
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Correct article usage
the Spanish
Spanish only
section accounted for 30% of total responses, with no other Add a hyphen
Spanish-only
language
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group
making up 20%. Use synonyms
French only
and Add a hyphen
French-only
another
Correct quantifier usage
other
language
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groups
recorded the same points as 15%, and Use synonyms
German only
and two other Add a hyphen
German-only
language
students came in Use synonyms
third,
with making up 10%.
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On the other hand
, in 2010, the proportion was similar Linking Words
with
the previous level. In terms of Change preposition
to
Spanish
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group
accounted for 35%, making it the highest section in the graph, followed by another Use synonyms
language
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group
at 20%. Use synonyms
Lastly
, the remaining Linking Words
groups
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such
as French only, German only, no other languages, and two other languages accounted for 10% of Linking Words
total
percentage.
In summary, Correct article usage
the total
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Correct article usage
the Spanish
Spanish only
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Spanish-only
group
remained in first place throughout both time periods, Use synonyms
while
no other Linking Words
language
and French only decreased and recorded Use synonyms
same
points Correct article usage
the same
with
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as
German only
and two other Add a hyphen
German-only
languages
Change the noun form
language
groups
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