The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison
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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of British students at a particular university in England who were bilingual or multilingual
in addition
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to English, in 2000 and 2010.
Overall
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,
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the Spanish
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Spanish only
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group
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was the most common pupils,
while
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the remaining
groups
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share
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the
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similar proportion. In 2000,
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the Spanish
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Spanish only
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section accounted for 30% of total responses, with no other
language
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group
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making up 20%.
French only
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and
another
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other
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language
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groups
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recorded the same points as 15%, and
German only
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and two other
language
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students came in
third,
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with making up 10%.
On the other hand
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, in 2010, the proportion was similar
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the previous level. In terms of
Spanish
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group
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accounted for 35%, making it the highest section in the graph, followed by another
language
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group
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at 20%.
Lastly
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, the remaining
groups
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such
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as French only, German only, no other languages, and two other languages accounted for 10% of
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the total
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percentage. In summary,
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the Spanish
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Spanish only
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group
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remained in first place throughout both time periods,
while
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no other
language
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and French only decreased and recorded
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the same
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points
with
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as
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German only
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German-only
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and two other
languages
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language
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groups
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words spanish, group, groups, language with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • converse
  • additional languages
  • language proficiency
  • monolingual
  • multilingualism
  • proficient
  • trend
  • significant changes
  • decade
  • notable increase
  • commonly spoken
  • comparison
  • data reveal
  • observed
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