You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant You do NOT need to write any addresses

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Dear manager sir, My name is

rakul

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Rakul

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I am your permanent customer .I am writing

this

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letter to express my

disatification

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desertification

with the cuisines of your

resturants

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restaurants

restaurant

and the services which

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had

last

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weekend.

last

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friday

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Friday

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, I went to your

resturant

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restaurant

with my

collegues

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colleagues

we had a party there and we thought to

spent

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our day

overthere

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over there

.We ordered sushi and

italian

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Italian

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dishes and plenty

others

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of others

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,when we

recieved

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received

our ordered

firsty

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first

firstly

they served it very late and

then

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we tasted it was so spicy and salt added

unnecessary

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unnecessarily

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as well as

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not properly decorated.

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was really

embarrasment

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embarrassing

for me as

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reccomend

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recommend

your

resturants

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restaurants

restaurant

to my

collegues

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colleagues

. I would like to

advice

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you that you should need to maintain your staff and

also

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traine

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trained

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them how to handle the customers and

giving

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proper services.

other

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thing want from you

that

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you

ought

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to invite us again and provide us

proper

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with proper

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food and service which might be

benefits

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for you as we

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also

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are also

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your regular customers and by doing

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collegues

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colleagues

happy and they will visit there again. Looking forward

for

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your response.

your

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yours

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faithfully rakul

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Grammar

Ensure to proofread for spelling and grammar mistakes.

Tone

Try to be more polite in your requests. Phrasing suggestions positively can encourage a better response.

Structure

Make sure to structure your paragraphs clearly with one main idea per paragraph.

Task Achievement

You clearly expressed your concerns and explained what went wrong with the meal and service.

Tone

The letter maintains a friendly tone, which is appropriate for this context.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

185 words

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