The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line
graph
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illustrates information regarding New
Zealand
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import trends from
Australia
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and
Japan
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over a decade between 1994 - 2004.
Overall
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. We can see from the
graph
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that
imports
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from both countries fluctuated , but
Australia
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saw a significant
overall
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increase
while
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Japan
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's
imports
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experienced a decrease. New
Zealand
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relied more on
imports
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from
Australia
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throughout the period. In the first line
graph
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, in the year 1994,New
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Zealand
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Zealand's
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imports
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from
Australia
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were at 4000NZ$ .
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it steadily rose to 6000NZ$. There was a dip in 1999 to
NZ
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$3000, followed by a rebound.
Imports
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from
Australia
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peaked at 8000NZ$ in 2004. Turning towards the second
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,
imports
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from
Japan
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start from 3000NZ$.
Japan
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's import to New
Zealand
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reached their highest around 1997 at 6500NZ$. In 1999, the
imports
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fell to 4100NZ$ and again rose to 6000NZ$.There was a sharp decline in
imports
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from 2000 and reaching its lowest in 2204 at 2000NZ$

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, zealand, australia, japan, imports, nz with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • significant changes
  • consistency
  • variations
  • overall growth
  • decline
  • diverge
  • converge
  • spiked
  • economic policies
  • trade agreements
  • global economic events
  • predictive insights
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