You have recently moved to a different flat. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have moved describe the new flat invite him/her to pay you a visit. BECAUSE I CHANGED MY JOB FRESH FORWARD TO WESTIN HOTEL IT HAS 2BHK APARTMENT WITH ONE BIG HALL AND ATTACHED BATHROOM. ALSO IT FETURES SMALL KITCHEN WHERE I LOVE TO COOK DELICIOUS FOOD. As we have not been meeting since 2 months you can come to my house on coming sunday. I will give

Dear John, How are you? I am writing

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letter

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letter to inform you that recently I moved from 99

street

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to Jasper Avenue.

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with, I got the new job as a manager at

Westin

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the Westin

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Hotel. As my previous role as

warehouse

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a warehouse

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associate was not related to my

dream

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dream,

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I dropped that plan. Not only because of

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job

but

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also

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I want to experience the downtown life. Let me give you

overview

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of my unit.

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, it is

2bhk

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a 2bhk

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apartment with a large hall. It has

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bathroom and

specious

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spacious

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kitchen, which is my favourite part of the flat. Do you remember I talked to you about my new hobby? Cooking.

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one of the main reasons why I

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chose

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this

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apartment.

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haven't met

since

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for

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2 months, you should come

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my house. I would be

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happier

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if you

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come on coming

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weekend. I am planning to cook special dishes for you only. I am waiting for your reply. Yours lovingly, Avi Patel

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Aug 13, 2025

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grammar

Fix small grammar errors: say two months, not a 2 months, and use this coming weekend or this weekend. Correct 'letter letter' and 'We haven't met' in past tense.

vocabulary

Use simple words and correct wording for flat parts: 'spacious' not 'specious', and 'to my house' not 'at my house'.

structure

Group one main idea in each paragraph: move and job in one paragraph, flat in next, invite in last. Use clear order.

punctuation

Use proper punctuation and shorter sentences to help flow. Add a bit of variety in sentence length but keep it easy to read.

content

The letter has a clear aim to tell of a move, a new job, and a visit.

tone

Friendly tone with warm words, which fits a letter to a friend.

cohesion

Good use of linking words like 'To begin with' and 'Moreover' to join ideas.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

173 words

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