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Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. What do you think is the reason for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

In a recent survey conducted by times magazine states that shopping is the most famous pass time for youngsters. In my opinion, shopping is the convienient and intersting leisure activity that is why more youngsters are attracted to it. If the shopping is controled or with in the budget then it is a positive development.
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Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, Few animals are at the edge of extinction, because of human actions. There may be lots many of reasons and important of them are discussed below.
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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Living in a place where one speaks in his mother tongue rather than the requirement can be problematic. It is incompatible with life in an area where one say things which others can't understand, or one can't get what others say. One should adapt according to the environment, by learning a language which is spoken by the majority in a specific country.
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Some people believe bicycles have a lot of advantages, whereas others believe bicycles have more disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the salad days of millennium, the society is polarised into two groups almost equally regarding the notion that whether riding cycles have more benefits or drawbacks. Diffraction people have their distinct mindset. The following paragraph would shed light on both the approaches and draw a conclusion.
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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, environment protection has become major concerned in public. There are some people think that individual people can do nothing to protect the environment its only government and big companies responsibilities to protect the environment and make a difference. I think that every individual do a lot of things to protect the environment.
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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, environment protection has become major concerned in public. There are some people think that individual person can do nothing to protect the environment its only government and big companies responsibilities to protect the environment and make a difference. I think that every individual do a lot of thing to protect the environment.
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Some people think that it is beneficial for children to do paid work, while others think that it can be harmful for children. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is argued by some people that children should not work, while others say it is an advantage for them. This essay will discuss both, the advantages and disadvatages of the two arguments, and will conclude that advantages outweigh the drawbacks.
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Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. What do you think is the reason for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

In recent years, shopping has become favourite pass time for most millennials. Youngsters can be seen in malls and markets all over the weekends. Steep decrease in prices of consumer goods, and easy of availability are the top contributors of this trend. Conventional leisure activities like playing sports, pursuing hobbies, family get togethers have taken a seat back.
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In many countries smoking in now illegal in public places. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that smoking is being be banned in common places particularly in bus stops, shopping malls in many parts of the world. This essay agrees with the statement because it affects the passive smokers and considered as bad behaviour.
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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Major issues, that most of the countries are encountering, are related to environment, population and education. Even in my country, we are facing the same issues. We are going to discuss regarding the same in the later part.
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In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

nowadays, the Smoking is an serious issue. Most of the countries made it legal, to smoke at public places. Will discuss the pros and cons in the later part.
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overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle this problem

In the last decade, increasing number of city residents has contributed to various problems. Although, these problems can be hard to tackle with, there are some solutions that can be undertaken by government and individuals themselves.
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Teenagers should not be allowed to use mobile phones in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that the use of mobile phones by adolescents in schools should be prohibited. This essay agrees with this statement because they use of mobile phone is a source of distraction to students during classes and also creates unnecessary competition amongs these children in the school. These reasons given will further be discussed in the following paragraphs.
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Q:Countries should spend money on trains rather than new roads. Do you agree or disagree?

People nowadays prefer to travel via train than by buses or private vehicles. I totally agree with the fact that the government should spend more on maintenance or improving the services of train facilities rather than constructing new roads. This essay will discuss the benefits of train services which include frequent connectivity and they are more environmentally friendly.
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Many people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others claim that schools should give reward to those who show improvement. Discuss these two mind.

Education, plays an important role in each and everyone life. Awards, for acheivement's is good approach, to make the students motivated to do their task better. Various people have different opinion in the process, which we will discuss in later part.
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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Nowadays, Various issues are bothering across the globe, out of which environmental, population and their basic necessity is major concern. Even my country have the same, which will be discussed in later part, along with solution.
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Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do agree or disagree with this view?

A debatable topic is whether extreme sports should be stopped however, some sports enthusiast believes that these activities poses to be helpful in improving the lifestyle of humans. This essay will analyse both the negative and positive effects of these high risk activities
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Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do agree or disagree with this view?

A debatable topic is wether dangerous sports should be stopped. However, some sports enthusiast believes that these activities poses to be helpful in improving the lifestyle of humans. This essay will analyse both the negative and positive effects of these high risk activities
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Some people say that education system is the only critical factor to development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is generally accepted that the education is need of modern world. Some people have the view that good education system provides base for the progress of a country while others deny it. In my opinion healthcare and natural resources are also provide support to reach required level of development.
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Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?

Many mentors hold the view that cross-cultural exchange program would bring advantageous benefits to all student. From my perspective, disadvantageous though such program can be, they can not undermine the advantages.
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