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Violent sports should be banned from TV and international competitions. To what extent do you agree?

Violent sports has long been under fire for its unsightly nature. While some people petition to completely ban them from sporting events, I am of the opposite, for several reasons stated in the following essay.
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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relative large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the population of the some countries includes a considerable difference in the number of young people and old people. This situation provide enormous advantages in the economy of the countries.
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more and more companies are allowing employees to work at home.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In this tech-savvy world, multinational companies are encouraging work from home to their employee.However, I believe, their harmful impact outweigh the benefits.
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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

Small vehicles like electric cars should replace instead of those run with fossil fuels like natural gases, oil etc. To my point of view I am agree to use electric cars rather than cars those burn fossil fuel. Electric cars are more eco friendly than cars those are running by fossil fuel and also cost effective
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as global trade increases between different countries many daily necessities are produced in other countries.such goods are usually transported a long distance.Do the benefits outweigh its drawbacks?

Globalisation has revolutionized our world in many aspects.Now,we don't belong to a big planet earth.Everything is available everywhere.There are many advantages and disadvantages .
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“People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest making it easier?”

Today, people often find it difficult to adapt to new situation.For example, when you have first child or you have an illness.Whereas, you need make some changes in your live.Moreover, it is harder than it seems.
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In some countries, it is common for women to participate in the workforce when their children are young. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

It is a common thing in a few countries for women to work when their children are small. There are some negatives for this, which include not able to look after her child and increase gap between mother and child. This also has positives of a working woman, such as increased family income and more affordability in life. This essay will discuss both.
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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. What are advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Over recent years,advanced in technology.These days people trip to, for example south pole.While this can be beneficial to some extant.However, there are both and cons of deciding to do this. In this essay.I will discuss some of the reasons why researchers journey of this kind of places.
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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

The table and pie chart provide the data about transportation and using of car in Edmonton in the entire period.
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Some people believe that it is fairer to assess a student’s ability based on their performance during the whole course rather than giving a formal examination at the end of the course. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Assessing a student’s ability based on his/ her activeness through the whole course is thought to be fairer than evaluating through exams. I agree with this view for certain reasons.
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Think about your response from yesterday. Where do you want to be 10 years from now. Go back and take a look at what your wrote if you have to. Now with that in mind, What kind of life do you want to have built in the time period?

Wow, a great question. I think, the most important think is clarity and peace. That's why even when I was a young boy, I chose the nickname Huzura for myself. Thinking of which, it's weird that I still couldn't achieve that inner-peace. I don't know what to do about it. Maybe I can Google it after writing this. Maybe I'll deter from this goal and accept it is what it is.
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the only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is true that hard punishments can increase road safety. But, I believe it can not be the only way and we need more different solutions. I am not really agree to just stricter punishment.
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Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life.

In today's world many individual think that people could not know nothing from the last our life nowadays, while some people of the opinion that ancient times is a beneficial cause of data people's life.I personally go with the letter and in the following paragraphs I shall discuss both viewpoints and finally give my opinion.
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According to a recent study, the more time people use the Internet, the less time they spend with real human beings. Some people say that instead of seeing the Internet as a way of opening up new communication possibilities world wide, we should be concerned about the effect this is having on social interaction. How far do you agree with this opinion?

Ever since the advent of internet, a new era of communications began. Although internet has removed the communication bariers, it also deminished the time spent on interpersonal interactions. In my opinion, face to face communication is heavily impacted by the communication through the internet.
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spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, with the improvement in online platforms and more affordable programmes, people are able to communicate in verbal way, compared to the past. Some people believe that oral communication is more effective than written communication. In my opinion, these two forms of communication are very important in our life.
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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Over recent years humans could nothing improve the nature.Just leadership and big organization.Some people believe that it is also good thing some poor family. I agree with the statement government should spent myriads of money on environment.in the following paragraphs. I shall put forth my arguments to support my opinion.
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Teenagers should follow elders .They should challenge the thinking of elders. Discuss both and give your opinion.

Teenage is a phrase of life in which children question almost everything around them and change their lives in any direction.We should advise them or let them do whatever they want.
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Computers are being used more and more in education and some people believe there will soon be no role for the teacher in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt, without computer life is in vain. As, education system has changed due to excessive use of computers. Some people believe that decrease the importance of teachers in education by the passing time. I disagree with statement because teachers our guides and nobody can replace them in education system.
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Some experts suggest a method to solve the environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuels and all vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When it comes to the issue about environmental protection, somebody illustrates that the cost of fuels and cars should be raised. In my point of view, I disagree this method.
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In many countries, more and more women have full-time jobs as men. There is a logic that they should share the housework equally with men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In addition, division family tasks can promote gender equality, environment with an emphasis on mutual support and respect. For example, if the housework is given equally between the parents, the efficiency of working in the home is better and make children understand that no one is exempt from family duties. Besides, sharing housework is a way to show our love and care for our dear family. This will help family affection become strong, sociable and close. It can be expressed through simple acts of interest like husbands washing dishes after meals instead of wives. Men will gradually understand the value of family tasks if they help women in housework.
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