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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been commonly debated that in recent years celebrities become popular due to their glory, lavish lifestyle in comparison with accomplishments .I agree with this statement that some famous people have a detrimental impact on youngsters, whilst I consider that the others set positive precedent.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Although the technology of agriculture now is much more advanced than it was before, many people around the world sill starving. I think there are two reasons why this could happen.

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Life nowadays is generally much more stressful than in the past. Give some reasons why people suffer more from stress nowadays, and say what they can do to reduce it.

In the past, people spent much time at home with their family rather than now. This indicates togetherness as a main pillar of communication could be typically maintained as one of the solutions to reduce the sufferer of life. However, nowadays, people frequently have some action out of their home. As a result, the action might increase stress.

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Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is thought by some that choosing a career early and sticking to it,will likely result in a more satisfying work life as opposed to those who keep switching jobs. I totally agree that the earlier an individual is exposed to a career path and continues practicing it the more likely he/she is going t be fulfilled career wise.

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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?

Although it is claimed by many people that children should not do any kind of paid job before 18 years of age, I strongly disagree with this idea.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Educating children is more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking websites. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It goes without saying that the ever-increasing development of technology has revolutionized human beings’ lives to a great extent. Education as one of the most indispensable part of individuals’ life is not an exception to this change and improvement. While some people believe that the absence of modern technology was more beneficial since education children was easier, others stand at other side of the continuum and hold the view that the modernized revolution has made educating much more easier. Personally speaking, I am against this idea that educating children in this era is arduous and the reasons to support my idea are substantiated in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believes that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?

Its moral duty of every individual to pay taxes to the government as it is responsible to run the state. This essay disagrees about the thoughts of some individuals to not pay their taxes. While, The Government needs the taxes to provide basic facilities to its people along with sparing budget to run the whole country.

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Some people believes that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?

Its moral duty of every individual to pay taxes to the government as the government is responsible to run the state. This essay disagrees about the thoughts of some individuals to not pay their taxes. While, Government needs the taxes to provide basic facilities to its people along with sparing budget to run the whole country.

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Please elaborate on these points above and provide any additional information regarding this applicant which is not apparent in the academic transcripts. Other relevant comments may be included that provide a complete picture of the applicant's abilities and potential.

I have known Bibhu Kalita since Sep’15, when he joined customer care department after getting transfer from Jamshedpur plant of Tata Motors.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.

Undoubtedly public health is one of the most important issues that has concerned all governments around the world. Although many individuals believe that adding the number of types of sports equipment can enhance people's health, others including me deem that such solution is not sufficient and the government has to find other ways. (53 words)

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest of our lives, while others believe that adult life brings more happiness.

Undoubtedly thinking about what period of lifetime is the happiest, has been common among all people around the world. Although some individuals believe that the teenage years are the happiest time, others including me assume that adulthood stage is still better. (41 words)

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The role of education is to prepare children for modern world.Schools should cut art and music out of the curriculam so that children can focus on useful subjects such as information technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

The main goal of education is to make children ready to face modern world.Schools should remove art and music from the syllabus so that pupils can concentrate more on important subjects such as computer skills.Although,it is one of the possible suggestion out of many.I largly agree with the notion.The reasons for my agreement are described in further paragraphs.

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Many Individuals believe that Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn, while others don't opine the same. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Many Individuals believe that Bicycles, as the mode of commutation is of more advantages than travelling by cars. In today's era, owing to busy lifestyles, demand for leisure hours lead to more and more use of scientific advancements. Mode of travel, needs to be of high consideratation in this regard. I would argue on the side of travelling by bicycles.

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Nowadays most people are not as fit and active as they were in the past. What are the causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions.

In this contemporary era, some individuals are not healthy and active as they were in the olden days. This essay will discuss the main reasons for this incident as well as few tips to overcome this problem.

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Nowadays most people not as fit and active, as they were in the past . What are the main causes of the situation ? Suggest some possible solutions?

In this contemporary era, few individuals are not healthy and active as they were in the olden days. This essay will discuss the main reasons for this incident as well as few tips to overcome this problem s.

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children who are brought up in families that do not have large amount of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brough up by wealthy parents. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The importance of children upbringing is a frequent topic of discussion. It is argued that infants who grow in poorer families are more prepared for their later lives than kids educated by richer parents. I believe that also the latter may be ready for the adult life by facing other difficult circumstances at an early age.

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international tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweighs the advantages ?

The rising amount of tourists is bringing hotly-debated discussion on the potential negative effects which may occur in terms of damages to environment and local people. Despite these possible drawbacks, I believe that the positives of international tourism outweigh the negatives.

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In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?

Undoubtedly, presently, there is a change in the structure of a family, many people moved to form a single-family. Also, an individual’s role has been changed within the family. In the past, solely men were the breadwinner of the family, whereas nowadays, women also take an equal role in family income. This essay agrees that this trend has brought numerous positive developments.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

In some peoples’ opinion, the choice of clothing can reveal so much about their cultural values. Also, they think that the way people dress up portray their character. I disagree with this statement and in this essay, I will discuss my reasons.

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It is a common aspiration among many young people to run their own business, rather than work for an employer. Do you think the advantages of working for yourself outweigh the drawbacks?

These days, people who run their own business are becoming more popular and the majority of them are youngsters. They believe that running a business has many advantages over working for someone else, such as the freedom to make a decision and manage money in your own way. I completely agree with this point of view and in this essay, I will support my opinion with examples.

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