IELTS Writing Samples Band 6

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Many ecologist have supported for developing animals national park to safeguard rare species. Firstly, this essay will discusses on advantages and then disadvantages of this phenomenon.
There is no doubt that human beings have taken over the earth from wild animals for a long time. And according to some recent studies that the number of wild creatures has dramatically declined during a few decades. “what should we do” and “what can we do” become a question for everyone. This essay will discuss the cause of this problem and some effective measures that can be taken by us to tackle this problem.
The most ideal measurement of an academically sound mind is often debated amongst humanity. While some persons believe success is the best method to confirm if a person is brilliant, some counter this argument stating it can be measured through other tools. In my opinion,I agree with the latter that intelligence quotient should not measured by wealth, however, other tools such as their ground discovery, impact and published books can be used to measure this ability.
Having a job is mandatory nowadays to afford a good life. Having a well established career will certainly make life better. Can you do that while jumping from a profession to another, or You need to choose one position and stick to it? What I think is having a stale post is the key to establish a career.
There is opinion that nowadays academic education is not any more necessary for being successful. the skills and qualities require will provide in other ways. I tend to agree with former argument and I will explain why in this essay.
It is irrefutable that in past adults do a lot of exercise as compared to nowadays. Therefore, it is argued that many people play sport in their young age, but then stops when they become adults. However, this essay will discuss about the reasons of this trend in the first paragraph and, then it will concentrate on on its solutions in the subsequent paragraph.
The Internet has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years. Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether the overall effect of this technology has been positive or negative. While there are certainly valid arguments to the contrary, I personally believe that the benefits of the Internet far outweigh its drawbacks. These benefits are twofold.
It is irrefutable that language is an identity of every nation. A certain segment of society believes that in the learning Institutes, teachers should not force students to learn new language. I am family agrees with this statement. I would like to explicit it of such a measure.
In this present competitive generation, choosing the right path in education sector at university level is utmost important. Graduating in business or science based subjects has greater priority over arts streams like literature due to vast career opportunities and broader scope for innovations. I completly agree with the above notion. I would like to provide relevant examples to support my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.
In this modern era, people are becoming lazier day by day as a result of this, some people prefer to buy food from online while others still like the traditional way of buying food. I will discuss the both views of buying food along with my opinion in following paragraphs.
To be healthy and speed up the routine activities according to some people our house and office bay should be clean and well organized. In my opinion, I agree that keeping our home and workplace neatly makes us healthy and looking professional.
Some people think studying in groups is better, while some think self study is better for school students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Wearing uniform in workplace is compulsory for the employees in a few organizations. While it is sometimes thought that it will feel them dull and boring. In my opinion, I strongly agree with people who prefer to wear dress code. In this essay I will give some arguments in favor to support my opinion.
Presently, the number of species under extinction threat is increasing and that is showing us the importance of biodiversity.
Technology has drastically changed, an individual's preference. Presently many people have started to prefer ready eat food than homemade food. This preference has its own advantages and disadvantages. This essay will argue how the drawbacks are overcoming the benefits.
In the world of today, some people are of the opinion that animals should no longer be used and killed for food, fashion or medical industries. I find this idea partly agreeable as there is still a need to use animals in different purposes of life.
In the highly developed technological word, game industry has been growing dramatically, especially electronic games such as TV, video and computer games. While it is claimed by some people that these game bring children with certain benefits, others believe that gaming may be detrimental to them. The following essay analyzes both views and I firmly support for the idea that electronic games influence negatively on young generation.
It is thought by many that music across the world is often used as a tool to shrunken the gap between various cultures and generations. I completely agree with this notion not only because remakes of older versions are equally popular among all ages and international music concerts are frequent irrespective of bizarre language but also the money generated from music concerts is used for culture promotion all around the world.
It was the middle of June that I found Rapunzel. It was not Rapunzel, which I found after a long time, they were my dreams, that breath again. Rapunzel was my first barbie and first souvenir, which I did not choose by myself, yet it was similar to what I wanted. I was so young, around 4 or 5, and from all things that they talked about, I understood that my mother`s cousin (Ali Najafi) brings this gorgeous barbie from a planet that called Europe for me. I concluded that he went there to stud...
It is a highly debatable issue whether the government should spend money on medicine and education rather than on theatres and sports stadiums. In my opinion, all these things are important for the people and therefore, the government should allocate equal resources for both. Basic medical care is very important for the general public. If people are healthy, there will be more productivity of work and the country will prosper as a whole. There are many people who live below the poverty line and it is the government’s responsibility that they should receive medical aid whenever needed. There are also the elderly who have paid taxes throughout their working life and now need good medical care. Good education facilities are also the duty of the government. Today, there are a number of children from deprived backgrounds who get substandard education. They would definitely require a high quality of education if they are to succeed in later life. What is more, an educated soci...
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