IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 86

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy , with everything organized and in the correct place. what is your opinion about this ?

Nowadays, it is not uncommon to see that, everyone understands the significance of keeping one's house and working space clean and well arranged. In my opinion I completely agree with the notion of cleanliness and the essay will explain in detail about it.

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Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Across the world tourists are urged to accept the code of conduct. For the majority, the view is considered to permit the distinct various traditions in the facilitated state. Since, this essay will discuss both sides of the arguments. In my opinion, the tourists should follow the national rules and regulations of a host country.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely succesful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is true that the advertising has already become an integral part of our today’s market. While some argue that these advertisements cannot persuade people anymore, I believe that we, the customers, always have a particular interest in ads even though they could be found everywhere around us.

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Some people suggest that a country should try to produce all the food for its population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the help of globalization, international trading is much easier than it was before, therefore we can find a variety of foods from all over the world on the grocery store shelves. Although, many people believe that the government should produce all needed products for their citizens within a nation, whereas others argue that importing goods from other countries is a good idea. I think that producing enough daily bread for people's consumption is a better way of making a country more secure in terms of its revenue and employment.

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Education in financial management should be mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement, give reason and relevant example.

Today, money has become a major necessity of life, which has given a rise to thoughts of including financial planning as one of the courses in schools and colleges.Some are in favour of this, while others are of diverse view. I completely agree with the idea. This essay will augment my opinion.

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Online education is becoming more and more popular.some people claim that learning has so many benefits that it will replace face to face education soon.other says that traditional education is irreplaceable Discuss both views and share your opinion

Studying online is booming among many of them. A section of society believes that there are numerous advantages of this tool and eventually will replace in-room learning. However, others say that the old style of teaching will never be exchanged. In my opinion, though virtual schooling has a positive aspect, but which will not be able to close the classroom system.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

What should be included in high school courses has always been a debatable issue. In the viewpoint of some people, voluntary tasks such as planting trees, cleaning streets and teaching underprivileged kids, should be a part of the curriculum, while others are of diverse opinion. I totally agree with the proposal. This essay will augment my view.

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Some people believe that residents are responsible for the place where they live to be clean and tidy. Others believe that government is the responsible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A place where we live-in requires actions to taking care of it. Some people think that the cleanness is the owner's duty, whereas others are willing to put the responsibility on the government. In this essay, I will discuss both view and state my opinion as a conclusion.

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Some people say that feeling of competition should be encouraged in children others say they should be taught to become cooperative. What is your opinion?

Children should learn many basic things so that they could survive in the future. Some people think that teaching children a sense of competition is better than a sense of being cooperative. I believe that both skills are needed by children in order to be successful.

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Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems when they are not be able to pay their debts back. In your opinion, do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages?

The credit card is a ubiquitous advantage of the banking sector of the modern community in these days and it is a peace of cake to get it for an individual, who works in any field on a decent amount of pay. Sometimes it becomes a real hurdle for a person to repay the overly used money, but we cannot count it as a drawback of the card because it depends on a user. In my opinion, these cards are superbly helpful for someone in need, so advantages of it outweigh the disadvantages. The essay will discuss both facets of a proposal with appropriate examples and reaches to a logical conclusion.

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Many people think that every individual is responsible for their happiness, but some people believe there are other external factors that influence us. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Everyone cherishes a happy life be whether it is based on internal or external factors. There is a category of people who believe that people are responsible for their happiness personally, but there are also supporters of the theory that only through external forces and circumstances can a person achieve happiness. In my opinion, a person’s happiness will always be according to his actions rather than throwing it on all other external factors.

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Some people believe that in order for a hobby to be enjoyable, it needs to be difficult in some ways. Do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, many are of the opinion that hobbies need to be challenging for people to enjoy and I think hobby as a relaxation method and a great opportunity for unmasking one's creative area. This essay will discuss the reasons why I completely disagree with the given idea.

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Some think that only those people who have worked for a company for many years should be promoted to a higher position. Do you agree?

There is an opinion that primary staff members who have dedicated many years to working for a particular company should be given executive positions in a club. I disagree with this viewpoint as much as younger workers may have more skills and if not provided with an opportunity for a promotion, they will become less motivated.

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Being a celebrity such as film star or singer brings problem as well as benefit. Do you think that being a celebrity bring more benefit or more problem?

It is always a debatable issue that celebrity brings more problems or benefits. I think that many advantages outweigh the disadvantage of being a celebrity, such as more wealth and huge fan base.

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Some people think that school should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A section of society is in the view of rewarding students who performs excellent in their academic exams. However, others say that it is significantly necessary to acknowledge more of the students who are improving. In my opinion, it is profoundly important to give recognition to someone trying to excel in their studies.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour for children?

There exists a controversial notion that children at a young age are supposedly taught how to differentiate right and wrong and the key factor helping them attain this skill is punishment. I am personally in favour of this idea for some following compelling reasons and this essay would suggest some other feasible types of punishment that can be used effectively by parents and teachers to constitute a good manner for children.

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Learning out the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, government has become a very important educational subject. Many books, TV shows, and radio programs are discussing past and books. However, it was stated that people should focus on present and do not learn history. In my opinion, I totally disagree that the past has to be left behind.

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Learning out the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, government has become a very important educational subject. Many books, TV shows, and radio programs are discussing the past and books. However, it was stated that people should focus on the present and do not learn history. In my opinion, I totally disagree that the past has to be left behind.

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Learning out the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the government has become a very important educational subject. Many books, TV shows, and radio programs are discussing the past and books. However, it was stated that people should focus on the present and do not learn history. In my opinion, I totally disagree that the past has to be left behind.

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Learning out the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, human history has become a very important educational subject for human. Many books, TV shows, and radio programs are discussing the past. However, it was stated that people should focus on the present and do not learn history. In my opinion, I totally disagree that the past has to be left behind.

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