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IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

In today’s society, it is widely acknowledged that the contentment has had a direct impact on people’s liveliness. However, some people do not even think about bringing gladness. This essay will explore why the concept of delight is hard to describe and what are the key element in acquiring elation....
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Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

In today’s society, it is widely acknowledged that the contentment has had a direct impact on people’s liveliness. However, some people do not even think about bringing gladness. This essay will explore why the concept of delight is hard to describe and what are the key element in acquiring elation....
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Women should have an equal role alongside men in both police and armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this modern world, workplaces generally do not have any kind of gender discriminations. Although, men are given more priority to be a part of some workforces, like police or army, some people argue that women should be given equal priorities in such fields. In my opinion, women should be given enough chances in such national security divisions, but there is no need of an equal participation....
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Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

In today’s society, it is widely acknowledged that the contentment has had a direct impact on people’s liveliness. However, some people do not even think about bringing gladness. This essay will explore why the concept of delight is hard to describe and what are the key element in acquiring elation....
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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Technological development has considerable impacted people’s lives. It is argued that due to the technology, traditional approaches and ways of life of a country vanished. It is further said that to maintain them is meaningless. I fully agree with this notion and this essay will discuss reasons for it....
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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued by some that the closing of small scale businesses will cause the demise of local communities because of the rapid growth of supermarkets and the inability of small shops to compete. In my opinion, I agree that the termination of local shops will bring about an end to the local areas. Firstly, many local people cannot afford the prices of goods from these large stores. Secondly, most of these supermarkets are situated far away from rural areas....
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Universities should accept numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The writer’s view, there is no denying that same educational opportunities should distribute between men and women. However, I disagree with the approach that the admission to universities depend on common of volunteers....