IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 84

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

It is necessary to be together during the pandemic situations so that the entire world can be safe again. If often recommended that the developed countries must help the third world war nations during any calamities so that the human life is saved. That’s how the other provinces can stand again to restart their life. I agree with the notion and will explain further why they should help others.

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Some people believe that the difference between the lowest paid jobs and the highest paid jobs should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Economic inequality has become increasingly popular among demographics of the society. Few people claim that the gap between the wealthiest and the poorest income brackets should be reduced. I completely agree with this statement; if that happens then there will be the development of the country.

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Countries should restrict foreign companies from opening offices and factories in order to protect local businesses. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons and specific examples to explain your answer

It is argued that to protect domestic businesses, countries should limit the number of multinational companies. However, I completely disagree with this point of view.

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The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A large faction of the society undeniably views a higher remuneration to be the vital element when selecting a job. However, many argue that job satisfaction should be the most significant determinant to choose a career path. I strongly agree with the latter viewpoint and will explain in detail the reasons why a higher pay package should not influence decision-making.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Telling young kids that if they work hard they can accomplish anything is pretty common in certain parts of the world. There are several benefits and drawbacks of this message sent to children. On the one side, this can empower the young kid, however, it can bring up some mental health problems, which can be carried to their adult life.

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Some people think that radio is the best way to get news while others think that television is better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A section of society believes that the FM channels are the constructive source to present current affairs. However, others argue that TV is far better to form to obtain the info. In my opinion, both are good in a way, but radio suffices the need for getting the news since it is portable.

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In many parts of the world, there is continuous coverage of sports on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves. Discuss this view and give your own opinion?

There is no doubt that live sports coverage on television is very popular nowadays in a number of countries. There are many people who think that this might be the reason why the youngsters do not participate in outdoor games themselves, however, I completely disagree.

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“Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication”. Do you agree or disagree?

The biggest characteristic that differentiates humans from the other species on the globe, is the ability to express their thoughts. In the viewpoint of some people, spoken communication is mightier than, written, while others are of diverse opinion. I however, believe that both modes of expression are prominent, depending upon the circumstances.

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Nowadays, people believe that the environment influences their accomplishments. Some people think their success and accomplishment were influenced by the places where they grew up. Do you think the environment does or does not affect people’s accomplishment and how it affects? Please give an example of a famous person to support your statement.

These days, there is an ongoing debate among people that success depends on the environment. Whereas some are in the favour that places place an indispensable role in order to get success, while I do not advocate this given notion and this essay will discuss the reason behind my view point.

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Over consuming sugar is unhealthy. Some people think that governments should take responsibility to control it. Others think that individuals should take responsibility for sugar intake. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Eating carbohydrate in an amount more than necessary is not healthy. According to a few individuals, the state should take care of this matter.While, the rest think that people should take control of their own sugar consumption. In my opinion, I believe that everyone should keep a track of their carbohydrate intake. However, this essay will discuss both views.

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"Prevention is better than cure."Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

We can see, undoubtedly, prophylaxis of diseases are considered more than having medication. Since, the medicine causes internal side effects. Therefore, I strongly recommend to prefer sickness preventive steps along with medical studies over funding other health. Addiction of drugs must be discouraged.

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"Prevention is better than cure."Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

We can see, undoubtedly, prophylaxis of diseases are considered more than having medication. Since, the medicine causes internal side effects. Therefore, I strongly recommend to prefer preventive steps along with medical studies to be given priority over enhancing health units and attracting the patients. Addiction of drugs must be discouraged.

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Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while other thinks is has disadvantages to this. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Sports events have started to be used as a means of advertising several companies and their products. Although some worry about the negative effects that the commercial use of sports may have on the activities, I believe that it is an effective way for business owners to gain public interest and for players to improve their performance.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Citizens have contrasting views, whether children should send to combine or single-sex academy. In my opinion, they can have more effective learning from the co-educational environment; however, this essay will discuss both views.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Citizens have contrasting views, whether children should send to combine or single-sex academy. In my opinion, they can have more effective learning from co-educational environment; however, this essay will discuss both views.

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People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less?

Today, people will consume more fountain drinks and sugary beverages than ever before, which has increased obesity and related health problems among the population of the nations around the world. This essay will discuss the major causes of the trend and suggest possible solutions.

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Some believe elderly people should live in nursing homes, others think they should live with their family members. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people insist that aged people should live in aged cares whereas others deem they should reside with their family members. I personally believe that old people certainly should live in an aged care as they have experienced and specialized staffs that can efficiently take care of them.

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Some people think that when recruiting companies should aim to take on people who are innovative and able to work independently while others considered they should recruit people who are able to work in a team and follow instructions. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Opinions on who is the most successful candidate for a job are often divided. Although team players are better, it is my firm belief that employment of those who are inventive and can deal with tasks by themselves is more sensible when hiring workers.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree ?

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's youth is a colossal upsurge in online shopping. This emerging growth may negatively impact the local shops in the countryside and cities. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the above view because online shopping has several advantages to consumers.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree ?

One of the most conspicuous trends of today's youth is a colossal upsurge in online shopping. This emerging growth may negatively affect the local shops in the countrysides and cities. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the above view because online shopping has several advantages to consumers.

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